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spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
Pirouette – A Collaboration
I’m spinning and whirling
She’s grinning, and twirling
My laughter contagious
Her caphtor, salacious
I twist and twirl until I fall
She fists young cowgirl
Crazy in love
Sounds above
Right down onto the green grass
Left upwards into the seen path
Tears are pouring down
Fears aren’t forming now
I don’t care
She really does
It’s gorgeous and rare and exciting
It’s cautious, fare and tongue biting
And the rain on my face
makes it all the better
And the pain in her heart
takes fit, hands held together
©️tara caribou & Anthony Gorman – 2018
9 Comments on “Pirouette – A Collaboration”
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Reblogged this on hands in the garden and commented:
A collaboration between the gifted writer Tara and I. Hope you enjoy 🙂
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This makes me want to twirl with a lover under starry skies as faint sounds of acoustic indie music plays in the background from a party we stepped away from so we could play alone.
Lovely.
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That’s not far at all from what I imagined myself. 💕
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So so so good. I truly adore this
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Oh! Thank you! So glad you do.
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You guys do good things together 🤗
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Yes! I agree!! 😉
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This is really interesting with the flow that seems to support, yet tends to reject. Not a piece to be read just once. There is more than that of the words.
Loved reading it.
John.
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Thank you so much, John! I really liked this one, too. I actually did a spoken word of this because it seemed like I could.
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