Raw Earth Ink
spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
Loose This Beast
you draw me like the sea
you clear my eyes
my heart
you ignite the fire of passion inside me
like I have never felt
I don’t want you
I need you
to take you
to brand you as my own
with the fire that is my love for you
a beast you have awakened
hungers
drives me
the taste of you
sweet
inviting more
if my teeth bite a little deeper
a little harder
the beast rages
my hands
squeezing your ripe flesh
bruises
bringing delight
as if they promise
my owership of your desire
dare I let this beast loose
will I lose all that I am to you
I am already yours
as I thrust into you
feeling your softness give way to me
my burning fire rages hotter
your moans
cries
feeding the flames
I am consumed
blinded
all is us
all is passion
fire
I burst into you
pulling back into myself
leaving part of me willingly
for I am more with you
I am better with you
you are my everything
and I worship
at the altar of our love
tara caribou | ©️2017
18 Comments on “Loose This Beast”
Raw Earth Ink 
You write epic verses , Tara.
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Thank you! Wow, what a compliment coming from you!!
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😊welcome my dear CC😊
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Even within the intense sensuality with which you write, there is a softness. This is beautiful!
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Softness… huh. I guess I can sort of see that. Thanks for reading, as always.
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Yes, indeed, those last few lines are spoken from the heart. You are always welcome!
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Pure passionate animal like
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I hope that’s good… I think it is.
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Oh yes it’s good
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This line, “dare I let this beast loose, will I lose all that I am to you…” The tension here is immense. I feel as if this speaks so much truth about human relationships. We are so complex and always moving that showing all of us is frightening, even to those that we trust. Fear of loss by giving the whole you…
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Yes, absolutely. It’s a scary, beautiful, exciting thing!
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We all fall victims to the beast unleashed. 🙂
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Or hopefully anyway…
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“leaving part of me willingly
for I am more with you
I am better with you”
’nuff said.
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Right!! I probably should’ve just made those three lines the poem and deleted the rest! 😉😁
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Nooo? But those three lines slay. Like, literally. This is my ghost typing this.
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I am glad they touched you, even if it was a killer touch.
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They always do. In some way, they always do.
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