Raw Earth Ink
spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
Would You?
would you cherish my beating soul?
would you cherish my artist’s hand?
you’re everything to me
would you watch me finger myself?
would you watch me shake and dance?
I’m filled with visions of us
would you taste my so-soft lips?
would you taste my heady love?
you’re more than I could hope for
would you listen while I read to you?
would you listen to my silent dreams?
I’m resting in your peace
would you inhale my feminine scent?
would you inhale every whispered sigh?
you’re the one who gives me wings
would you embrace my tender tears?
would you embrace my wicked tongue?
I’m more myself with you
would you feast on this open blossom?
would you feast upon this deep mind?
you’re the love of my life
would you accept the hidden parts?
would you accept this delicate heart?
I’m desperate yes for you
tara caribou | ©️2019
19 Comments on “Would You?”
Raw Earth Ink 
Oh! I love this. It’s a heady verse. I fav this.
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I’m so glad you do! 💕
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Beautifully written 😀
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I love this. A full on declaration of love and commitment. Wonderful 👍🏻❤️
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Thank you.
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tara great post
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Oh my, he’d be a fool not to say “yes” with mighty exaltation.
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‘mighty exaltation’ makes me happy.
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Oh- if you only knew what I know…I would do whilst you were clutched in thy hands. 😉
Lovely write as always…
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Oh thank you, Poet! Lovely addition.
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So fabulous, so cool, and so much yes in my reply. ❤❤👅
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Awesome!! 💕
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Who would not want to answer YES to all of your requests? You have us all captivated.
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Self doubts arise while love continues to grow in my heart.
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I would probably answer ‘yes’ to 50% of these.
And ‘fuck, yes, please’ to the other 50%.
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Hahaha! Oh River. This comment makes me incredibly happy. lol – I read the first line and thought… yes, well, 50 is better than 25…. then the second line and was like, *fist pump* yaaaassss!!!! You’re awesome and totally made my day.
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While I would like to believe that I am naturally awesome, it is more likely it is you that brings forth my awesomeness.
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oh you!! hehehe! I’m pretty sure it’s the other way around…
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Nah.
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