Raw Earth Ink
spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
Dawn’s Electric Kiss
dawn quietly carefully
tiptoed across the sheets
revealing my alabaster skin
unclothed
naked greedy flesh
hungry for you
shivering anticipating
quaking and aching for your touch
taste my sweet lips
parting
electric kisses and swollen tongues
exposed soft breasts
heaving and bruised
greeted the rising moon
much like my heart
and yours
tara caribou | ©2020
This can be found in my poetry book, Fallen Star Rising.
23 Comments on “Dawn’s Electric Kiss”
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This was sexy and tender as well. 😍
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Nice observation, Rob! I was thinking sexy and maybe a bit tender-hearted as I wrote it.
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So Sultry and sweet
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Thank you Phil. Always so good to see you. (Will you be publishing another book about Randy soon??)
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Hi Tara, I doubt very much, it was a real flop, not many sales, it’s available for free now and not very many downloads either. If ever my other books become popular and it starts getting downloaded I would consider, I have several different ideas on the go at the moment, 3 books started at 1000 to 2000 words, hard to commit the time though
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I get that. Completely. Well… I enjoyed it. Publishing is a real labor of love, for sure.
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Your book out yet?
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No. It’s close though. I’ve had a few things come up this last, month and a half which prevented me from putting the final touches to hit the publish button, but soon(ish)….
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Hot and Sweet ❤❤❤
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Thank you! I like this too.
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Awesome imagery, as always! I really like the personification of dawn in the first couple of lines. Or could it be that Dawn is perhaps an actual person? Very nicely done!
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hehe! I left that up to interpretation! But originally I had written this in three parts (of a day: dawn, midday and evening, but felt it didn’t add to what I wanted to convey and out came the black marker to cross out 60% of the poem lol) Thanks so much for reading.
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Nice! The end product you have here is great. It seems like I always edit out about half the words of everything I write.
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Both sensitive, beautiful and erotic in equal measure. Love it.
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Thanks Chris!!
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Always a pleasure to read you.
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Thank you so much. I’m flattered, truly.
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☺
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What a lovely way to start the day. Such beauty: your soul and the piece.
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Oh you!! That made me smile.
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Definitely, a sight to savor. Warm and to the point.
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To me, very romantic…
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Yes! Love that electric kiss!
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