Rebirth

Posted on April 10, 2020 by tara caribou

in the bright blinding light
I shiver
never been here before
ripped from the comfort of the womb
soft sounds
always warm
what have I become?
I hear your voice
croons of love
no more screaming
but wait
what am I missing?
coughing, I sputter
you say my name
peace follows
and I breathe
I breathe
I breathe

Fallen Star Rising – poetry about loneliness, love, and healing

Category: PoetryTags: Birth, Breathe, Free Verse, Heal, Life, Poem, Poetry, Rebirth, Thoughts, Turmoil

4 Comments on “Rebirth”

chrisnelson61
April 10, 2020

I like the comparisons here between birth and then the feelingbof rebirth when one phase passes and a new one begins.

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- tara caribou
  April 10, 2020
  
  Yes! That’s exactly what I was going for… the comparisons. I sure appreciate your comments.
  
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enchantingsunrise
April 11, 2020

This us beautifully written.

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- tara caribou
  April 11, 2020
  
  Thank you so very much!
  
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