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A Vision I Had
I see you on your knees,
as if in prayer or supplication,
you are nearly weeping
and there appears to be
a heavy burden
weighing on your shoulders and hands
now a cloud descends,
covers and engulfs you
and the mist from the cloud
coats your skin
and covers your beard like dew
and you drink from the mist of the cloud
it refreshes and invigorates you
color rises, you breathe in deeply
you smile a tiny smile and you feel lighter
and you stand up
and it’s almost as if you can fly,
you feel so light
and your face is glowing
and there! there!
you begin laughing
tara caribou | ©2020
23 Comments on “A Vision I Had”
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Hopeful and joyful Tara.
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That’s how it felt to me!
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That’s lovely.
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It really, really was.
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Very Nice Tara… 🙂
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Thanks. I just wrote what I saw.
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You are amazing… ❤
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Thank you ☺️
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Most Welcome Tara 😀
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Fuck I love this. Especially “And there! There! You begin laughing.” Perfect. ❤
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Thank you! I just wrote what I saw and how it felt.
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This is so beautiful
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Thank you, it was a joyful moment.
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You’re very welcome
The joy was tangible thanks to your ✍ skill
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Your comment makes me happy, thank you.
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You’re very welcome 😊
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Wonderful hopeful message!
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Thanks Tom! I sure appreciate you reading.
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i wish …
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I think it’s very possible…
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💕Love, loved this. Such imagery. Just reading it 💫rejuvenated 💫me.
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I felt rejuvenated as well! I’m so glad you felt it too.
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🙂
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