spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
dreams to reality
I feel your hand brush my hip
and stirring
I realize I can feel you
coursing through my veins
no
deeper still for
you move along the synapses
of all my nerves
somewhere along the way
you found me
as I lay eyes wide open
staring
in death’s grasp
your lips touched mine
and you breathed out
forcing your air into my lungs
oxygen to a dead heart
I took you deeper inside
pulled you in
my brain slowly
rewired itself around you
old pathways shriveling away
new ones formed around your dna
your fingers
digging in to my side speak
I’m yours
we both know it
there’s no other way
I can’t breathe without you
please
bite my lip
pour more of yourself into me
use your fingers to delve
into my most hidden parts
curl them and flex them
while my lip bleeds
and our tongues twist together
my every thought is shadowed by you
now talk to me about
science and
mathematic formulas and
prepositions
as our bodies slide together
slick with want and need and desire
wrists bound by the shackles of your palm
ignite all my senses
I am completely remade in you
tara caribou | ©️2018-2021
Read more like this in my poetry books, Fallen Star Rising & Four.
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I love your writing but this line made me chuckle “talk to me about
science and mathematic formulas”.
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We all have things that turn us on…
but also, I was alluding to engaging my my mind as well as my body (in the following lines).
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Love this!
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Thank you Bill. I’m glad you were touched.
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Tara, you have a magical way of putting in words the most compelling and rich aspects of emotion and physical need.
I’m a fan!!!!
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Thank you. That means so much to me. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.
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It was awesome Tara!!
Keep writing!!
Please!!
I love to read you!!!
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Thanks Bill. Just one drop of water in a bucket that’s already full.
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😊😊 !!
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Lovely
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
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Love this post. I feel a part of the experience.
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Thanks John. I’m glad you were touched by it.
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I like this line-
‘wrists bound by the shackles of your palm’
Amazing work.
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Thanks Stories. I (at least last night when I scheduled it) am actually pleased with the way this one came out. I feel like I actually said what I set out to say.
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Wow. The rawness in this piece is exquisitely captured. “Somewhere along the way/ you found me/ as I lay eyes wide open/ staring/ in death’s grasp” seemed to be the turning point for me… at least, it grabbed my attention and demanded I pay attention. Very well done! Thanks for sharing! 😃 ~Kelsey
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Thanks Kelsey. I’m so pleased that this could touch you in such a way.
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I found this erotic, and I’m not even a scientist or a mathematician. Keep them coming, Tara.
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That’s great, Guy! I sure appreciate you reading! ☺️
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To connect on both the physical and spiritual plane is a truly wonderful thing. A great poem, Tara.
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I wholeheartedly agree! Seems to be a rare thing. 😌
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Breathtaking lines….from twisting of tongue to the science & mathematics twist….how interesting….
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Thank you Navin. I hope you liked this one.
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Very much, Tara ❤️ ✨
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The scientific, the body, all angles of your words, you intrigue as ever, Tara.
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Thanks Eric. Taking it from the known to the unknown. 🥰
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Absolutely beautiful poem :)))
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Oh thank you so much! ☺️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
*****MATURE MATERIAL*****
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Thank you for sharing 💕
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹
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this truly is that almost ineffable feeling that you feel below the skin when someone touches you so much it resonates every single part of you, limbs, organs, the very cells of your blood that is almost and probably is primal for sure x
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Absolutely!
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I love the imagery of a lifeless doll being filled with air and reborn again. I enjoy how you stage your pieces – step by step, we get deeper.
The only thing is that I feel like the first stanza should come later because you talk about synapses in the brain and THEN you say you pulled him in deeper…
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Great thoughts there, Goldie. I appreciate your perspective! 💕
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I see the mountaintop of poetry when I read a piece like this. So good!
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Thank you Benjamin! I’m so glad you could feel this one.
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You’re welcome!
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