spit, mixed with dirt – muddy words flow
I am the color brown.
Brown as the mud on my hands.
Brown as a churning dirty spring river.
Brown as the fur of a diminutive mouse…
No, I am not quite brown.
Perhaps I am the color black.
Black as cooled lava flows.
Black as the starless night sky.
Black as his eyes dilated in passion…
No, I am not quite black.
Perhaps I am the color red.
Red as deep late sunset.
Red as molten voracious nights.
Red as the blood coursing thru my veins…
No, I am not quite red.
Perhaps I am the color yellow.
Yellow as a dandelion’s delicate petals.
Yellow as the sun reflecting off the sea.
Yellow as his delighted laughter in me…
No, I am not quite yellow.
Perhaps I am the color grey.
Grey as the rain in October.
Grey as the bark of my favorite tree.
Grey as the remaining ash in a fire pit…
Yes. I am certainly grey.
But then again….
with you, I am bursting forth in color:
Crimson as an opening rose.
Peach as a flickering candle flame.
Gold as a sunrise watched from within your arms.
Emerald as the endless fields of summer wheat.
Teal as a still lake’s surface.
Violet as the sky at twilight.
White as the sun shining through a cloud.
Yes. You make grey forgotten.
tara caribou | ©2022 revised
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Amazing!
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Thanks!
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You get a like because you deserve it. First denial of the usual colors, then bursting out in the less than usual. Nice finish.
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Thanks Wayne! You got it!
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Great work on this, especially the ending.
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Thanks so much Stories.
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You’re welcome Tara.
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This is awesome , Tara. You wrote the most amazing verse. I am going to read it again. This goes to my favourites.
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Wow. Thank you so much. I’m humbled.
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I tweeted this.
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Oh! Thank you!! Wow… I don’t think I’ve ever been tweeted before.
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Beautiful 💕
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Thank you!
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This is beautiful Tara ❤️
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it.
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I always do ❤️
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Awwwww thanks!
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this is so beautiful!!
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Thanks!
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You have the most beautifully romantic heart, Tara. 🙂
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I think you mean “tragically” lol. Thanks! ☺️
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same thing 😉
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Perhaps
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Reblogged this on hands in the garden.
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This is one of your best poems!
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Hey, thanks Braeden! So nice of you to say.
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Welcome Tara!
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Since the past 4 years now, I’ve related to this greyness as well.
May we both have a splash of color in our lives soon ❤. (and oh, don’t mind the notifications. It’s just me checking out your all your work that I missed. I can’t seem to fall asleep for some reason)
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I know you’ve got a lot of blogs to catch up on. Hopefully I can help you fall asleep 😉
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This is fantastic! Wish I’d written it. 🙂
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Thank you, Tom! 💕
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We are indeed far more than the sum of our parts – and aren’t we all a rainbow of colours at our best – and yes, sometimes we shine through the impact of others. A great poem, Tara.
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Thanks Chris! We are all connected. A prism of friendship and kinship.
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Wonderful contrasting verses, Tara! You bring each colour to life with such vivid descriptions 🙂
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Thanks Tom! Sometimes stepping back allows clearer vision.
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We both like our colors, don’t we? Great poem, Tara. ❤
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They each have meaning. One merging into the other, there are no clear separations. Connected, for good.
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That builds beautifully to the vivid conclusion.
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Thank you! We each touch one another in ways we may not know or notice, but the influence of friendship and love is definitely there!
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Reblogged this on cabbagesandkings524 and commented:
Tara Caribou – What color, or how many?
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Beautiful colors of you, Tara.
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Thank you, Anita! So nice to see you drop by 😌
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My pleasure always Tara 💖
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Very poignant. And what an amazing photograph!
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Thanks Goldie! It was a gorgeous rainbow.
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That’s so wonderfully colourful 🙂
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Thanks Simon! 💕
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🙂❤️
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This went full circle and came out on the other side bursting with life and colour! That last verse man 🙂
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Thanks OD! I’m glad you enjoyed this one.
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