Book Review – The Side Effects of L by Alex Le’Gare

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I read this book in paperback. This is an unsolicited review.


What I Loved:

Mr. Le’Gare isn’t just another “Insta-poet”. Inside, we’ve got 180 pages of powerful, deep, meaningful poetry filled with grit and heart. The pages are a fairly even mixture of micro-poetry, free-verse poetry, and postmodern black-and-white photography. It’s all atmosphere and mood. I really liked the varying styles in which they were presented. The micro-poetry, untitled, written on a black background, and al perfect-for-the-scene font.

I loved the introduction which describes the meaning of the title and what “L” truly means. Carefully breaking it down in a method which I adore. (I am constrained from giving any more spoilers regarding it.)

He has not only some outstanding poetry but his titles are memorable, for good reason. Things like “Every Skeleton Misses Its Skin”, “Hang ‘Em High”, and “Fireflies and Killing Jars”.

The book is a great size, feels great in the hand, and the simple cover stands out. The pages are a bit thin, which is par for course from the Amazon printers, which is well-known for its lower quality products.

What I Didn’t:

The font choice used on the free-verse poetry pages was probably the worst issue I had in the book. It’s not a great poetry font, as it feels too clinical and just doesn’t work with this. For many avid readers such as myself, the appearance is nearly as important as the words themselves. My other gripe would be a formatting issue, and this not from the author, as there are obvious back-coding issues which were not dealt with by the editor, which made for some annoyance while reading due to inconsistencies but not enough to do more than make minor pauses in reading. [This is a common issue with self-publishing but not something I would have expected from a small-house publisher (and never see in big-house publishing). Again, not a huge deal, but a small note.]

My Favorite Bits:

Mr. Le’Gare filled the pages with potent, powerful pieces and a few of note were “6”, “Tsunami”, and “Title Be Not”. Just super great writing that sticks with you long after you’ve put the book down.

My Overall Score:

4.5/5 stars

(1/4 for formatting hiccups, 1/4 for font choice which goes against the overall mood of the book)

Final Thoughts:

Alex is an underrated poet, in my opinion. He’s clearly experienced some hard knocks but he’s ALL heart and soul. I am looking forward to seeing more from him because I just can’t see him stopping this. He makes it look easy and natural, a sure sign of a great writer.


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~tara caribou

A FINAL NOTE ON REVIEWS: it may seem that I am harsh on many writers for their editing, formatting, grammar, punctuation, etc. I do so unapologetically. First, because this is a review not a popularity contest. Second, because honest criticism should help us grow as artists.

The fact of the matter is, these things MATTER. A mathematician must use his tools and use them correctly to be an effective mathematician. A surgeon cannot simply say, “I know I can’t sew the wound closed but at least I could remove the appendix or whatever that thing is called.” Same with writers. We can’t claim to be writers yet refuse to use proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation. We can’t claim to be a photographer just because we know how to push the button on the camera (or phone). There’s an art to it.

So while I may appreciate the artist as a person and their words, I believe that it does us all a disservice to claim that lower quality editing is okay, whether in word, deed, or omission of criticism. Instead: believe in yourself! Believe in the power of your words! Put the effort into being the very best you can be. Ask for help. Grow and learn. 

“Four” poetry and photography by tara caribou

I’m happy to announce the release of tara caribou’s second poetry collection, Four. Four is 185 pages of black-and-white photography and poetry. This book will only be available in paperback through tara caribou directly and on lulu.

“Wherever there is number, there is beauty.” Proclus, Greek Philosopher

Four. Four seasons. Four elements. Four phases of the moon. Four is the number of humanity in the physical realms and represents the now. It is a foundation in calmness and being grounded.

Within these pages you will discover fresh perspectives on love in its many forms. You will see the earth through the eyes of nature. You will feel the despair, the horror, of dark depression. You will feel the green tendrils of new love. Inside you may even experience what four can be within your own self.

The hope is that by the time you have finished, you will have viewed the soul of humanity, by the lens of nature, from a different angle.


In paperback at: lulu and directly from the author.

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©️2020-23 | tara caribou

The Mad Puppeteer Announcement – Podcast REBLOG

I hope you’ll click through to The Mad Puppeteer’s blog and give a listen to his interview on Megha Upadhyaya’s podcast, “It’s Never Too Late”. Robert and Megha had a great conversation about art, poetry, social media, and how Robert got into writing.

Greetings, my friends! I hope you all are well. Recently, I was a guest on Megha Upadhyaya’s podcast, It’s Never Too Late. We talked about writing, …

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Unidentified

arctic cold seeps through bones
night sky, twinkling lights, crisp, clear
a moving star becomes something more
back and forth, back, forth, now around
circles and speed, defying logic
minutes earlier booms rattled the trees,
then our hearts
another light, brighter than the full moon
rises, rises, rests, holds, disappears
camera lifting as puffs of breath into the icy air
what is this?
not a single cloud and yet
the moon, blue, is nowhere
and then is suddenly is
unveiled yet my eyes refuse to turn away
blue, red, pale green, blinking
around and around
focus, steady, focus, click
in the shadows and yet feeling exposed
puff, puff, hold your breath
twenty minutes, thirty
my fingers glacial with chill
I blink and it’s gone, just gone
clouds form before my eyes
beneath and beyond its former shadow
thirty minutes later a jet races overhead
then another
and another
another
the stars watch it silent observation
turning ever over
the weather channel still shows
no clouds in our area though I see them
hours later
what are you hiding?


tara caribou | © 2020

“Confusion Perfume and Other Neurotic Comics” adult comics by emje mccarty

Raw Earth Ink is proud to present Confusion Perfume and Other Neurotic Comics, an adult graphic comic book featuring early comics and notes from artist and poet, emje mccarty.

Using her dry wit and deep emotions, she guides us through her inner thought processes while describing the perils (and lessons learned) navigating amongst love, life, failed relationships, and parenthood.


In paperback at: lulu or signed copies directly from emje.

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copyright 2020-23 | emje mccarty

Static Dreams book excerpt – ‘Comic Death’ by Agyani

The following is an excerpt of the short story: Comic Death by Agyani, which you can find in the anthology Static Dreams Volume One. Inside you’ll find nine dark and twisted stories written by him and other amazing authors. I hope you enjoy this little snippet. Oh, and click any of the links below to buy.


“There’s someone who wants to hear your story, the way you died. He likes to hear stories that are…you know, different… people dying in the most ridiculous manners. I believe he will love to hear yours.”

“Why can’t you tell him?”

“Telling the story will help you get over it. I happened to be passing through the house where you died so I know your story. You’ve never discussed it with anyone, and I understand it must be difficult for you. But unless you talk about it, you won’t be able to deal with it. Besides, he only allows the person himself to narrate the story.”

“Why should I care?”

Tony scratched the hole on his chest. The moonlight fell gracefully on him, and the large bullet wound tried its best to peek from under his shirt. I’d only seen it completely once. It was a most singular wound. He’d killed himself with a shotgun. The hole was so neat it looked like the work of a surgeon. I’d always loved bullet holes, having given a few of them to people myself. But Tony’s topped the lot. I had tried catching a glimpse of it on many occasions but had only seen it in bits.

I didn’t look at the wound for long, though. I knew Tony only ever touched it when he was about to say something uncomfortable. It didn’t happen often – although I’d only known him a month – but when it did, he always said something interesting.

“He’s known for giving people a chance at revenge.”

It became almost impossible to control the rage bursting through my body. My arms shook with seething anger when my killer’s face flashed in my mind. I’d never felt such fury in all my mortal life! It was an offer I just couldn’t refuse.


copyright 2019 | Agyani

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Static Dreams book excerpt – ‘The Guest House’ by Chris Nelson

The following is an excerpt of the short story: The Guest House by Chris Nelson, which you can find in the anthology Static Dreams Volume 2. Inside you’ll find nine dark and twisted stories written by him and other amazing authors. I hope you enjoy this little snippet.


When Duncan turned around and stepped out of the room he found himself on a jetty. He checked behind himself and saw that the jetty was long and jutted out almost precariously over the ocean, its wooden planks weather-worn and tired. With one footstep Duncan had found himself almost at the head of the pier, although, by now, he had given up trying to fix logic and reasoning to the day’s events. It was early morning once more: a warm sun had already burned the clouds from the sky and a prickly heat had begun to creep over the land beneath the sky. Duncan could feel the warmth on the back of his neck and his naked forearms and wondered if this was some kind of sign that his day would indeed begin to make sense.

The grey sea stretched out away from him, its slate surface broken only fleetingly by the current which was dragging it unerringly towards the shore. Leaning forwards, his arms resting on the wooden rail which ran along the top of the fencing which ran alongside most of the jetty, Duncan stared into the water. At first, he saw nothing but the water looking back at him as if it recognized him as a long lost, half-forgotten friend, but, as his eyes began to adjust themselves to the disruptive properties of the water, he started to make out details in the shapes that he could see. The seaweed swayed and parted, its heavy fronds abandoning their weight to the up thrust; fish skittered across his line of vision, darting and diving, and surfacing occasionally to gulp at the warm air; once in a while a gull would appear and dive beneath the surface, but the fish were awake to the danger, and the gulls returned to flight disappointed.

As he continued to stare into the water, his gaze going ever deeper, Duncan became aware of a new shape which seemed to be forming itself in ever more detail. It was a shape that he would never have associated with the sea, and certainly not one that he would have expected to have seen. Below the surface of the water the shape began to reveal its features in ever greater detail. There was no mistaking the identity of the shape that Duncan was seeing now: it was clear. It was the body of a man.

Not for the first time, Duncan found himself paralyzed, unable to move or act, even if he had wanted to or known what to do. He felt as if he were an audience of one, watching a film play out before his eyes, and, at the very moment when the endangered character on the screen was pleading for help, he was unable to give it: he had been drawn in and made part of the action, given the role of potential hero, and then been chained to a rock, inert and ineffectual, destined to merely watch as the world about him crumbled.

Below him the body seemed to float as if suspended somewhere between the surface of the water and the ocean bed. Despite the greyness of the water and the brightness of the sunlight Duncan was seeing it in ever greater detail: black denim jeans, soaked now in the brine, clung tightly to the man’s legs, his feet held firm in expensive looking boots. He was wearing a t-shirt, also black, which bore a picture of a group that Duncan enjoyed listening to, but this was looser and danced across his torso with the underwater currents. His eyes were wide open and staring as if they were fixed upon something in the water that Duncan could not see and, as bubbles of air began to rise from him lips towards the water’s surface, Duncan realized that he knew the man, or at least he recognized him: it was another of the residents in the guest house – Jacob.

At the exact moment in which this realization hit Duncan he became aware of music filling the air around him. He was unsure of exactly where it was coming, but he could have sworn that it was rising from the sea; or more specifically from the body beneath it. The tune swam for moment inside Duncan’s head awakening recollections of where he had heard it before. As it replayed in his mind he became aware of the words that he had heard Chanai singing in her sleep just moments earlier, first hovering over it and then seamlessly joining with it and becoming one. He realized, too, where he had heard the song before: stood, by the side of a quiet road, watching as a car plowed through the figure of a running man.


copyright 2019 | Chris Nelson

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Creating Art

Just for fun, here’s some fun art projects I’ve been working on. No reason other than the act of creation. Hope you enjoy….

When a kid asked me if I can paint a hedgehog, this is what I did. I’ve never drawn, let alone painted, a hedgehog. So be kind. (Her response when I showed her: “where’s the treehouse?” Sigh. There’s just no pleasing some eight-year-olds LOL)

5-minute pencil sketch exercise

Work in Progress – I need to pick this back up again


tara caribou | ©2020
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